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for The Torture of Paris

by Masquerade

person Lisa
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's taken me a while but I've finally managed to get enough PC time to finish what you've written. It seems weird to say that I enjoyed reading a story about torture but I can't think of any other way to put it. It's a shame you've had to stop but what you've written so far has been fabulous. I really hope you get back to finish it at some point but I can appreciate how real life would have to come first. I haven't updated one of my stories in a couple of months for no other reason than I've had better things to do with my time. I can also appreciate writting something this intense would take a lot of effort. If I tried to do anything like this I'd probably find it emotionally draining a lot of the time. But you did really well with the plot you'd thought up. I must say I was disappointed to see Marishka die but it's your call. You made up for it with introducing Odysseus.

Anyway, I'd better stop rambling. Take care.
person amethyst
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
took ya long enough to post this chapter... pls continue soon...
person Winnie
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad Paris has an allie now so I hope the next chapter comes quicker, you tease so, keep them coming
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write the next chapter soon please
person Masquerade
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right guys. I know you're all chomping at the bit for more. To the person who asked if this will turn M/M, yes, honey. :) I'm trying my hand at slash, being as I write mostly het. I am doing my absolute best to update but I'm kind of busy right now and the muse has made herself scarce. I'm sorry to everyone who is waiting on me. Within the next week, I promise. Probably over the weekend. I promise. There will be more torture, never fear; but Odysseus coming in has a big involvment in this story, as I'm sure you all have guessed.

I haven't forgotten about you guys and I appreciate all the kind reviews!
person legolaslover
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can i ask something? is this a m/m fic or will become a f/m fic?, i ask because , if is possible request that this fic be an m/m fic, you know odis/par or somthing like that, pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

until now this fic is just perfect, the ang is wuau
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to write anymore chapters
person Niki
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!! please continue!
person RC
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been a very well written story, it's sad of course and the princess dying shocked me, I only hope that her father will turn out to be Paris's savior, by now I boudt there is much anyone could do that woul dhurt him, he been through it all pretty much, the worst of it anyhow. Violation, degration, humiliation, the list goes ont ect.
I DO hope you will be updating soon tohugh I am DYING to see what this new guys going to do to Paris, will he help him> Or end up hurting him worsse? Or will it even matter now...
Poor prince Paris...
Update please...
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great great fic... please, an update! I can't wait for more... and to know more about Odysseus ooohh i hope he will help paris *ggggg*
pleeeeeaaaassseeeee post soon!