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for The Torture of Paris

by Masquerade

person Anon
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what has he got in his for pity sake!!!!!!! write the next chapter soon poor paris will anyone save but not to soon(evil grin)
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brill have you ever thourght of doing a legolas in troy story legolas and achllies oooohhh the possabilates
person BoyBeaterBlue
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmph...I thought I was already signed in but apparently not. Oh well
Absolutely amazing story. I've been waiting for someone to post something just like this for the longest. You do have a few typos but there are very few writers that don't. PLEASE say that you'll update with the utmost expedience becaues I can't wait for more of this!!!
person Epee_Girl
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this.

I fucking love this!

Please do post more! :)

Your descriptions are incredibly vivid, and you manage to keep the whole story in a very dark and dramatic tone. And I shouldn't mention your imagination, LOL :) You certainly have a very active imagination! :)

*sigh*
I wish I could be the one to clean Paris's body... Hmmmm... :)

Keep posting!
I'm loving this!
It's sick, it's twisted, it's fun! LOL :)

-'Ronica :)
person thesadness
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heyy!! thas was good!!
more!! more¡¡
what are you waiting?? muhaaaa
kiss
person thesadness
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woderful go on!!!
Is to sad but we love it!!
kiss
person badgirl
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
!Oh my ....!

Plese moreeee!!.

No Hector to rescue? He is die?? NOooooooooo!!
ok
We love it ani way
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person Piper'stwin21
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The updated chapter was great like the whole story I sure hope there is more to come I like this story alot keep up the great work!;D
person Piper'stwin21
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far I really can't wait to read more please update soon (for some reason it grabs me)
person Passion Darkly
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my....goodness....poor...poor paris.....

yet....goody.....goody....goody....this fic is so scrumptious....smmy mmy indeed!

i can't wait for more and soon I hope....very soon....

Passion