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November 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
so I found this story very intriguing, and I wish that you would be willing to continue. I really want to see how this twisted relationship between Barricade and Bumblebee will progress. ^w^
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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read your story for the tenth time. When are you gonna post chapter 6? I wanna know what sexy tortures Barricade will put Bumblebee into next! Update ASAP, please!
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow did not see that coming, that was really interseting. I love the way your writing this. Can't wait to read more.
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! It was hot! Bee and Cade ^w^When do we get to see more pairings? Not that I don't like BB/Cade, but I'M a crazy for Master/Slaves stories, and the more the better!
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! You just have to continue this you know that don?t you? Pleeaaasee!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O Soooo hot! That's really a good start! I LOVE it! (And yay for Sam'ds death! >.<)
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still love it!
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
keep up the great work.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The avoidance of pain is a common reaction. There is no call for being noble as there are no questions being asked and thus no one to betray. So the desire to avoid that pain is unchallenged. Something I can see is 'bee being forced to watch while one of his companions is tortured in the cell next door, a reminder to why submitting is a good idea. It is also amusing to watch people squirm. To submit their bodies to a torment while mentally going insane. Doing anything to avoid the pain.
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Maybe later, WAY later in the story, you could show Barricade and some other 'Con force Bumblebee and their slave to 'face with each other. Like Prime or Jazz or 'Hide. Those are the three I really want to see with Bee. You can throw Ratchet in there so he doesn't get lonely. Doesn't even have to be just one Autobot. Yeah! Have the 'Cons force an Autobot orgy, that'd be awesome! Like I said, all up to you. Update ASAP!