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for Breath and Dreams

by IndigoMoone13

person Barbara
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a wonderful writer. That was incredible. A/P's love story is so mulit-leveled. Once you reach a plateau of hope and love, you find yourself in the depths of despair. More, more.
person J0
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFULLY done! very dark but nicely written. i look forward to reading more of your work.
person Laurachan (too lazy to login)
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, intense, arousing and dark... just how I like them. ^^
this is a great story, and you're really talented: great job!
person Laurachan (too lazy to login)
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry! I didn't remember having already reviewed the story! Well, I hope you don't mind, because I liked it very, very much and I wanted to show it.
person jeannie
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. You are truly a talented writer. Are you planning on continuing?
person Laurachan (too lazy to login)
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... dark story.Well, I like it all the same ^^
Your lemons are good and the plot is really interesting, even if is a bit confusing...

please keep writing!
person Ed
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore it! A really hot and interesting story!
I must admit that I like the seducer Anakin, even if I'm more into romatic stories...

More please!


person Lilla
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot, HOT! I almost got burned! :)
Awesome story!

plz, continue, I need to read more!
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Awsome story! The story shows so much tension and so much great detail! I hope you make more! The story plot was easy to fallow as it lead to a quite revealing detail about Anakin and Padme!
person pensfan100
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you only have 2 reviews on this fantastic story! Somehow it's gotten buried amongst the 161 stories in here. It's such a great story, full ofsionsion and angst, yet sexy and tragic. It flows effortlessly. I love seeing this through Padme's eyes. I hope more people review it because it's worth it!