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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good start. I hope you update soon! i'll look out for more. You character doesdn't seem too mary-sueish. keep it up, it's awesome!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continrue, continue.. did Jack learn that thing with the dress he did to Elizabeth in the next chapter??? If you don't know what I'm doing, I 'm HINTING that you shoud definetly continue!!!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I like your writting and your use of words. Please write more. I like how your charecter has personality even in the first chapter.
I like your writting and your use of words. Please write more. I like how your charecter has personality even in the first chapter.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens next??? Please continue!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo, don't stop now!!
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hope you've got a new chapter coming up, b/c this story looks like it's going to be really good. ^_~
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grat story so far. Please keep updating.
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what happens! When does Jack come in? I'm a sucker for romance. It's really good. I mean I look at other fics and get bored because they don't capture me and don't make me think, it's like reading a text book. But your story is really good. It captured me and got my imagination going. I can hardly find fics that are as good as yours! Please continue!