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for Bathroom Breaks

by SannM

person Zilo
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... funny and cute and still very much in character for both of them.

Oh yeah, and hot too. ;P
person kaz
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's such an awesome fic!! I practically swooned while I was reading, 'cause Travis is so adorable here. The story's funny, tastefully erotic and still well managing to be true to the original movie plot and characters. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous fic, Sann M. I worship your writing talent.
person DeeBee
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was... beautiful. *Sniff*

<3
person Amber
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was yummy!
person Love to be Anon
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh so very hot and .....wow, are you ever thinking of doing another? Maybe a post-movie ficcie so Beck can finish what he started ::lecherous grin::
person Scrawl42
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*DEAD*
But, in, like, a good way.

I'm too tired to point out any errors, but there's only a few small ones here and there anyway, so it's cool. The fic was a little confusing (I had no idea that Beck's pants were doen, for example) but it was pretty good all in all.