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October 1, 2019 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible. I stayed up all night to read it, I can't believe I never found it before. Please tell me its not abandoned <3
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December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love your spin on Troy, Achilles emotions are much more raw than in the film, he is more human, vunerable which is exciting.
I really want to know what happens, does he die in the War, does Breseallas (deffo know i spelt that wrong lol) make it and warn that the enemy Greeks are coming.
Im relatively new and i dont know how im going to know when you have updated, please help
Oh yes, please update when you can, i love it!
I really want to know what happens, does he die in the War, does Breseallas (deffo know i spelt that wrong lol) make it and warn that the enemy Greeks are coming.
Im relatively new and i dont know how im going to know when you have updated, please help
Oh yes, please update when you can, i love it!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! I admire you're writing and am looking forward to reading more. I also wish a sequel on embracing darkness..
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this movie, and, even though I knew Achilles died in the end, i was still sad. Thank you for writing this AU of Troy, it's beleiveable, and it gives a taste of what could have been.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh ma god!!! this is so good!!!
PLEASE don't let achilles and briseis die!!! i want them to be together!!!
and please finish the story soon!!!
PLEASE don't let achilles and briseis die!!! i want them to be together!!!
and please finish the story soon!!!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is really awesome! There is only one fault that I can pick ( I myself used to do this until a real author, Sally Odgens, corrected me)
When writing speech, eg. "Don't do that," he said. you must not use a capital for the he or she. I know that it's weird but that's the way to write.
Anyway, your story is awesome and I can't wait to read more!
When writing speech, eg. "Don't do that," he said. you must not use a capital for the he or she. I know that it's weird but that's the way to write.
Anyway, your story is awesome and I can't wait to read more!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you cant just leave this story at this please oh please contuine this story i beg of you to please update i really like this story and would love to read it till the very end of it so please please please update it thank you, for this story because it makes my boring days actually non boring lol
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww.. this is so sad. Ive waited for you to update forever.. please update again.. i must know what happens. I love this story.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes i love it..YOU MUSTTTTTTTTTT CONTINUE IT...seriously i will be impatentily waiting for your next chap, please update soon. GOOD GOOD GOOD job so far, althouh i would like it that before you finish the story, have Brisais suck his cock hehehehehe Sorry but make his cock huge ok? and describe it in DETAIL...other than that, its really kool....