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for Spirits Forged in Fire

by pegasus2704

person legolas_estelstar
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
after being raped so savagely, do you honestly think she could walk, much less run? she would crawl... gee... anyway, great chapters. but, gasp eggads! i hope it doesnt have a sad ending. ! happy christmas'!
person legolas_estelstar
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! powerful words. im so proud! your maintening a precious balance between fuzzy feelings and pathtic romance. your doing so good! take care!
person legolas_estelstar
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a twist!! i just hope odisseus doesnt die or come against achilles!! oh and, haha it would have been so cool to see achilles in all his divilish power say he had a hunting to do and kill those who are after him, starting with kale. you know what im saytinh
/ ohohohohoho. anyway, you know? i would like to read a story (a romantic one) about eros and psyque. know that story? its so sweet!! so a romantic fan fiction about them would be so cool... anyway, take care!
person legolas_estelstar
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
forgive me, ive been so happy reading this chapters that i forgot to review. nice story. ive always wanted to read a happy aquiles briseida story. (those names are translated) thankyou so much, you are a very good writter! happy holidays!
person etherealprey
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Your story is amazing, and I do hope you write more! Please continue, I MUST know what happens next!
person michelle
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good please update soon, its been a couple months and we are all anxious to read more........
person Candice
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... UPDATE... NOWWWWW I NEED MORE... omg ... pleeeaseeee update . i love this story.. please please please
person Allyson
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eek, I'm soo worried about Briseis! You've definitely kept me on the edge of my seat throughout this story. Please update soon!
person gypsy
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon.
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person aCharmedOne
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh do go on with this pretty Please!!!

I really like this story.

Bye aCharmedOne