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for Spirits Forged in Fire

by pegasus2704

person april
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TREASON... and lots of it!!! i am enjoying your story. It has everything love, passion, angst, animosity, spite, revenge. Your story is awesome please continue i am literally glued. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! and btw i like to think of updating my stories in a certain way... that being just because people dont review it doesn't mean they dont read.!!! KEEP THAT IN MIND... :-)
person Jujupey
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope you havent finished writing it yet, because I want to know how it ends! Please please please continue, and ignore any flames: even though this story doesn't follow the historical timeline, it's the ideas and the way it captures the reader that counts. Encores for you!

Jujupey
person maggie
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
odysseus is not able to return home for 20 years after the battle of troy.
person jordan
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story's good and all but i want to see achilles more like he used to be. what's with him being a softy?
person pixie
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Very good! Please write more! :)
person Briseis
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit, you got to fucking finnish that,lol. just finnish it some how.
person lullabies
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp!* wonderful chapter. thank goodness the whole "poison the well" plan has been found out...sucks about briseus though lol...no really, very uncool of you. I was initially scared that you'd kill off achilles by the end of this story. but briseus+unborn child would be just as bad, if not worse.....though it would give us some room for a very angsty achilles. possbly in need of comfort? *plots evily* lol. anyways, I've rambled far too long. well done. can't wait for more :)
person lullabies
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp!* wonderful chapter. thank goodness the whole "poison the well" plan has been found out...sucks about briseus though lol...no really, very uncool of you. I was initially scared that you'd kill off achilles by the end of this story. but briseus+unborn child would be just as bad, if not worse.....though it would give us some room for a very angsty achilles. possbly in need of comfort? *plots evily* lol. anyways, I've rambled far too long. well done. can't wait for more :)
person lullabies
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! this is fabulous! Beautifully written, I'm so addicted:P...and I refuse to be kept waiting! hurry with the next chapter!!!!
person Execrable
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn you and your suspense! haha. I love it. Keep it going. This is the one story I am actually following.