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for The Three Armed Gunman

by Jezzebelle

person Ellie
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome story! PLEASE update soon! I love it to pieces!
person Eileen
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story...why aren't you updating anymore? =/

person shell91
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. I like a slow buildup to the funstuff (even though I don't always write that way myself) The only thing I might change is the spacing between lines, A space between lines would make it easier to read. Looking forward to more :)
person MarzBar
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this one is starting out. So, smut the next chapter or so? Sorry, not a nice girl and like to think of Agent Sands in the sack.
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good!! I hope you'll update soon!!
;-)
person O.
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing! I love they was you write Sands, not sappy, not too hard, good stuff. Sarena is a really awesome character, she seems so.....cool, the type of person you want to hang out with. Awesome, can't wait for the next update.
person Piper
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice so far. Please do keep it up. I like how you have him a little softer than I imagined. It's a nice change. Update soon. ;)
person Nicoletta Sands
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Naked Sands! Heee Heeee! *does little dance* Sorry i haven't reviewed before but now i'm back! YAY!!! a great new chapter and a reply to my review and a long new chapter soon and NAKED SANDS TO COME!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Update soon or i will die in a panful anticipative death!(anticipative isn't a real word but i know what i mean!) YAY!!!! more more more!!!! WOOOOOH!
person deppalicious
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the dedication and your welcome for the review! I can't wait till next chapter. Your such a tease! LOL Keep up the good work!
person deppalicious
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm LOVING your story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!