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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely loved every second of it! I wish I was Will Turner! hehe! MMMMMmmmmm! Excellent work! Keep it up!!!! .......... Whew! I think I may need a cold shower now! God that was great!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's a good story. i have to say it didn't thrill me too much, as i prefer a story with more depth and complications, but you did a fine job writing it. well done.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>Once Will was completely finished with the food and drink,
>the men took hold of him and laid him down on the
cot as comfortably as they were able,
>bidding him “goodnight” as they replaced the gag in his mouth.
...leaving him with the problem that he can not use the chamber pot (or whatever they might use there), as he is tied up, and neither can he ask for help, because he is gagged.
When they reach tortuga, I'd say he'd not so much need a plate and a mug, but rather a bath and a toothbrush. Not that I'd expect Jack to be picky, but there is a limit to everything and a present should be well presentable.
That aside, it's certainly a nice Christmas present/story. And good to hear from you again.
(Bootstrap Bill's ghost could to with some de-corruption and a new chapter for Christmas too. Please? *beg*)
>the men took hold of him and laid him down on the
cot as comfortably as they were able,
>bidding him “goodnight” as they replaced the gag in his mouth.
...leaving him with the problem that he can not use the chamber pot (or whatever they might use there), as he is tied up, and neither can he ask for help, because he is gagged.
When they reach tortuga, I'd say he'd not so much need a plate and a mug, but rather a bath and a toothbrush. Not that I'd expect Jack to be picky, but there is a limit to everything and a present should be well presentable.
That aside, it's certainly a nice Christmas present/story. And good to hear from you again.
(Bootstrap Bill's ghost could to with some de-corruption and a new chapter for Christmas too. Please? *beg*)