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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think Thax asks for Osmosis to 'be good' and 'a good boy' too much. i love the idea but i think you could find synonyms like telling him to 'behave' and 'obey' and instead of using 'good boy' so much, you could use 'puppy' or 'pet'. anyway those are just my suggestions. theres also a repetition of 'figuring' but thats less pronounced. i loved the fic btw ^^
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Read the story BEFORE the authoress....YOU....AMAZE ME!!! Wow! Just...wow! Agree with the need to shiver and love the line at the end of "Dominate me"........wow.........WoOt you have done it AGAIN and amazed me some MORE!!! Not usually a fan of NonCon but had to see it, since there simply aren't enough Osmosis/Thrax stories out there...SIMPLY NOT ENOUGH CURE US OF THIS ILLNESS WE CALL NO WRITERS WRITING!!! Now...I think I will take a veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery cold shower...and then have my daydreams about Thrax coming to save me from this place I call "boring" lol. You write fantastic fics, MORE WE NEED MORE!!!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS STORY RULES!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so freaking hot! you need to write more!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dangit...I need to do more laundry now....
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!! *scampers off to pantie drawer for a fresh pair* Very well done, my friend! Purr!
I love this Ozzy/Thrax junk, as improbable as it is. Though it would be a pretty good way to explain AIDS.
Super Sexy Aids Virus: Now, to disable the immue sytem...With lots of gay sex!! Who's first?
Ozzy: *raising hand* Over here!!
(disclamer: not bashing people with aids. I promise.)
So recomending this fic!
I love this Ozzy/Thrax junk, as improbable as it is. Though it would be a pretty good way to explain AIDS.
Super Sexy Aids Virus: Now, to disable the immue sytem...With lots of gay sex!! Who's first?
Ozzy: *raising hand* Over here!!
(disclamer: not bashing people with aids. I promise.)
So recomending this fic!
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my, i do believe i need new underwear as well. i think i like that line. "dominate me" *shivers*. please excuse me, i must go molest something.
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December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great for not being used to write noncon! I loved it! Hey, funny, because I had a little sketch that looks like an image from this slash! :D
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know... I couldn't really see this happening, ever.
this was really well-written though. I just had to pretend this was on some alien planet, and that thrax and jones were aliens... and then I did really enjoy some parts a little.
Jones's a white cell, though... White cells are wired to "hate" virus cells... and so they will attack virus cells automically upon sighting and impact. that's the reason why I couldn't see it happening. don't you just hate it when sciefintic thinking rules out the impossbity of an good story? lol
Anyway, I think there's more of a chance between Jones and that pill, but that's just me.
this was really well-written though. I just had to pretend this was on some alien planet, and that thrax and jones were aliens... and then I did really enjoy some parts a little.
Jones's a white cell, though... White cells are wired to "hate" virus cells... and so they will attack virus cells automically upon sighting and impact. that's the reason why I couldn't see it happening. don't you just hate it when sciefintic thinking rules out the impossbity of an good story? lol
Anyway, I think there's more of a chance between Jones and that pill, but that's just me.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah, hot! O_______O Write more Thrax/Ozzy! You rock!!