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for Unseen Moment In The Rain

by VashtheStampede

person Kogane
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me liked very much ^.^
person jesus
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hell yes! there needs to be more Smith on Smith action around here, or Smith/Neo. Anyway thanks for making me smile (not in a 'I'm a horny old man' way)
person Kitten Overdrive
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Red hot Smith on Smith action!
*Coughs* Seriously, it was actually very interesting. It was deffinitely a dynamic
I had never considered, what Smith would do with the other Smith(s). Talk about
fighting with yourself, jeez.The chapters were a little short but that's alright.
I wouldn't mind seeing more like this if you aren't too busy..............
Mmmmm. Smith.
Kudo's!
-Kitten OVerdrive
person Alexandra
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vash!

You rock! I love this story!
person smithsbabe65
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read slash stories, but I have to admit this one has caught my interest! It's well written and perfectly blends in with the final battle between The One and The Virus! Good job.
person smithsbabe65
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! Great job with keeping the True Smith in character! This is a very cool, twisted fic!
person smithsbabe65
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great last line! Very clever and very true! I really enjoyed this little tale! Hope to see more from you!
person claire
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, excellent last line. Great little fic

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