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for Jungle Terror

by dragonman

person Bumblefuck
schedule April 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Though the idea of a primeval dinosaur orgy is exciting in it's own right, Jungle Terror just wasn't descriptive enough for me. I couldn't imagine actually being there, even though what I was reading was clear. Maybe it's the idea of someone writing a fucking sexual fan fiction based on Jurassic Park that was so fucking befuddling I had to double check to make sure what I was seeing was real since there is no possible way this isn't a fucking joke. 6.4/10 - Would probably masturbate to dinosaur orgy story once more.
person dracosdemon
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again a job well done...Lex must surely be the dinosaur pin-up girl by now...grin
person Ultara-guyver
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not Bad, I wouldn't mind see more stuff like this.
person Nicobay
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
exelent ! hoep to see more
person PoopyBarney
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u r mai her0
person sibs
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good one. You shoul write a nother, longer one. Maybe a Lex/Dino one where she gets pregnent or something.
person Shukaku
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh, not really suprising, reptiles have unusually large....okay huge uh, um, members for there size.
person Skree
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mreep. o.o; That's all I can really say. ^^'

Nice?
person SereG
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well-done. I agree with you that there needs to be more JP fics including females, instead of always Yaoi stuff like between Dr. Grant and Timmy. I mean, come on! I get the yaoi problem in like so many categories that it's not even funny. Not that I'm against gay peoiple, but I don't think it should show outnumber the heterosexual stuff on here. Anyways, keep writing, k? K. Hey! You could always do one with that daughter of Ian Malcolm, that girl who was a gymnast. ;p Just an idea.
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I said in your other fic, just go though it an break it up a little. This was bit more deep than the other one, an a better fic than it.