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for The Turning of the Tides

by seraphina

person EscagirlUK
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more! This is getting interesting! ...yanno, I never thought that Will might not know how to read.
person Gypsy Luv!
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last couple of chapters where awesome! I didn't get to read them right away, been very busy! But thank you so much for updating so often! It was like having a special Christmas present from you waiting for me!!!!!! And oh how special it was! I'm very excited, seems the sexual tension is building nicely between our two lovely pirates! I am waiting with baited breath for the next update! Thanks again!
person .bennizze.jizzle.
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh.. time for the first raid. {a little nervous}
The Spinoza scene was highly amusing. You have very well-developed characterization in this story. Well-defined. I'm just blabbering on here, but I love it. :D Can't wait for more.
Happy Holidays!
person Gypsy Luv!
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HA! HA! HA! HA! I love the cabnet of piss and the whole way Jack had the keys hidden! Your a genius! I only wish dear William would have let our lovely Captain watch him undress! hehe! Thanks for the update, I will be regularly watching for more! *DRINKS ALL AROUND!*
person .bennizzle.jizzle.
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I positively love it. The humor and accuracy to the actual characters is exceptional. I'd love to see where you're taking this. :)
person Gypsy Luv!
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I must have more though!!!!!! And Soon! Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for Jack to grab Will again and kiss him like there's no tomorrow! hehe! Anxiously awaiting more here!!!!!!!!!
person emily
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love your story so far, please write more soon ........when are this story going to turn in to NC17?? please update soon.........
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! You've got a good feeling for the characters and a strong sense of subtle humor that the movie had. Can't wait to read more!