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>Will followed the instructions on the printout,
>parked at the stable as instructed,
>and Jack rented two horses
Wait, that's a bit quick. So they must have acquired a map and already worked out how to reach the Barbossa family (where to rent what vehilcle etc). But why is it news to them, then, when Mrs. Barbossa tells them there is a town nearby?
If they travel nonstop from America through Athens to some remote mountain village unaccessible by car, I'd guess Will must have quite the jetlag. He might fall asleep over his ouzo, or drop from his horse sleeping/drunk.
Pity they are out of Greece already again. I half expected you would let them run into Orlando Bloom filming Troy.
(Or at least a marble statue of Hector Barbossa, first sight as they reach the family's home. Just to scare them a bit.)

Thanks for keeping this story going. It's one of the funniest things I have ever read. I do wonder what will happen to Jack, Will and the bleedin' monkey and look forward to you enlightening us about their fate.

please update soon this story is so good, and the whole thing with the greek woman was so realisc for the most part, and fun to read since I was just in Greece not even a month ago. Anyway keep up the great work I absolutly love your stories.

Wahhhhhh Continue!!! It is so good!!

Okay, so I saw that you had reviewed one of my works so I had to head on over and see some of the stuff you've done! This was....artfully done isn't the word! I never thought of something like that for how the movie came along....I'm still considering it....

BTW, What is the eyeliner for???

Apollo

LMAO! Oh my freaking God this could only happen to Jack. That little demon would wind up with the relatives of his dead master. LOL. This is just too funny and the fact that Johnny was the one who found him and it was in the Enquierer is just perfect. Loved the reacstion the police officer had when he saw Jack. Update soon

Barbossa?
O.O
I think I need to lie down now...
stupid monkey.
Great chapter though!

>Get me out of this car and you’ll see me react to the light
*lol*
I'd still like to know which country issued a passport to a long-dead pirate. If he is Haitien he could always say that reaction were normal. *g*
So they will go to Greece? (Unless local reporters get them first.)
One can only hope dear Hector's relatives never learned what became of him.

Very nice! Terrified Johnny is cute.
I espescially liked the line where Johnny poked insides Jack's ribcage, touched something rotten, then puked. (Or maybe it was the margaritas? *g*)

Again I just loved the chapter! Your writing is excellent! Well I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon.