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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was great. I'm glad Johnny was in it!
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Johnny Depp's reaction about how Wes was not out somewhere in a car directing the special effects and stuff, and that it wasn't a hologram and then how he puked, instead of just fainted. Guess it doesn't affect you in the sameway once you are in a movie made by the master horoor film director himself. Please keep updating. Cna't wait to read about when Jack and Will (21st Century Will) meet Orlando.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope he put the coins back in the stone chest and closed the lid well. Otherwise, if that monkey was hiding somwhere nearby, Jack has a problem 881-fold.
>And Will said keeping my gold teeth looked cheap!
Quite a lot of stories claim something like this. Why is that so? Since when is gold cheap?
(Regarding your health, I do wish you well. Not that I'd think wishing well would help. All I can say is I think of you and hope for the best.)
>And Will said keeping my gold teeth looked cheap!
Quite a lot of stories claim something like this. Why is that so? Since when is gold cheap?
(Regarding your health, I do wish you well. Not that I'd think wishing well would help. All I can say is I think of you and hope for the best.)
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving and laughing along with this story! Got to love the "phony poo." You are writing Jack/Johnny very well. Are you going to continue and break the curse?
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That pirate - entirely too trusting. One would think Barbossa taught him not to show off with his treasure cave. ("Play things closer to the vest" and all.) You won't let the movie-makers cheat him somehow, will you?
Funny how it feels fitting to see Jack cook something spicy, even though he does not look as if he would eat regularly or much.
Please continue!
Funny how it feels fitting to see Jack cook something spicy, even though he does not look as if he would eat regularly or much.
Please continue!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better with each chapter. I can't wait until the next one.....keep up the good work. One question...do the boys meet up with any love interests??? Waitng to see the next installment......AAAAA+++++
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a funny twist. So they got the idea for PotC from Jack himself. Will he also play himself in the movie, with a mostly drunk or stoned Johnny Depp just giving his name for cover? (Perhaps devastating some hotel rooms while Jack is filming?) Please continue!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall I love your continuity, and in general your grammer and mechanics are great. There are a few times where what Jack says is a bit over the top, but in general I think you kept his spirit intact. It was definitely a page turner, and I stayed up very late trying to get to the end. I hope you write more soon. Good luck, and take care.
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've ventured into the POTC world. (And from what I've seen I think I'll visit more often) I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon.