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for The Commodore's Christmas Gift

by Yakkorat

schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A really cute, fun, fluff story ^_^ I liked it anyway. Also, I couldn't help but notice you wrote 'Stille Nacht' instead of Silent Night, which I almost looked over since it's also the version I know, being a dutch native speaker myself. The German version is also nice... which I remember very vaguely from going to church on vacations in Austria in the holidays. Or it could just be that Austrian churches are beautiful in themselves.
Aaanyway, got a bit astray from the story. (even if I'm not sure you can even read this with the system of reviews on aFF.net)
Just wanted to say, it was well-written and a job well-done, again, I found it really cute and warm.
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yakkorat, my lovely...that was wonderful! Really made my Yule holiday!

Hugs!

Hellborne