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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I think it's a good storie but please update it.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Too bad this wasn't the sequel to Pitch Black! You have a great use of words; I felt like I was there. Please, please, please, write a 2nd chapter!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is fantastic! I'm a fan of Pitch Black, and espcially of Riddick. You captured Jack ad His presonailties perfectly, I applaud you! I would really like you to continue...this so rocks!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! It's rare to find an author who really takes the time to develop her characters...
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Even the original female character seemed pretty damn interesting. I hope you update soon.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that's really good. I really hope you write more.
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cooool! I reckon this fic has a great beginning and your OC female is a great character.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope you update soon. That was great!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was so well written! i loved it!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i'm deperately waiting for the next chapter