rate_review Reviews

Ah, very promising start! First time I've seen magic grab the role, rather than the actor. And Tom Hanson should be as good as it gets, at walking the line between the law and the _other_ good guys. If he settles into the life he's been pulled into, that is. All the more interesting for me, as I haven't seen 21 Jump Street at all: I don't know what to expect from this character, and I like that.

SO happy to see that you added another chapter to this story! I love the 21 jump street series, I love the ending to the chapter....yay.

Ahahaha! I got the joke, that's hilarious. WRAH, WE'RE THE MCQUAID BROTHERS! I love it! I would absolutely love to read a another fic having to do with this one, it was excellent. I loved how Will gave the slaves the aztec gold. Great times.

Wow, this is very original and well written- I'm quite jealous really. I'm sorry I dont get the joke, but as I'm over 20 I spose I wouldnt have won anything anyway. I'm very intrigued by the last line... the who?

someboy else has been watching the 21 jumpstreet dvd collection! i totally got the joke, but i'm not
under 20, i'm 24. do i still get a prize? this was very well writen, you are very good with describing
things so that a person can actually visualize the story.

Good storyline to start with. Have my attention. Nice to see a story with Will in the future....but miss Jack. Hopefully this "new" Jack is just as good as the "old" one. They can't be appart, but I'm interested enough to wait for the next chapters to find out. Hope you update soon..........................cruiser