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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I’m hooked on this story! PLEASE don’t give up on it! I’ll go mad! (Realizes she’s lost it)… uh-yah… *cough, cough* update soon, if you will.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why do you have certain words in little quote marks? Is there a purpose behind that or is it a mistake?
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok before I read in anymore...what's up with all the fucking words in quotes? You have the most mundane words like fire place and Buddha in freakin' quotations! It's really distracting...
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just recently watch AVP movie at least 6 times already.. @_@ It just keep playing it on the movie channels all the time so I just watch it, lol. So then I decided to read fanfics for it and your story was the best! You seriously got to update this!!!! You left the last chapter very suspense like and this is me "NOOOOOOO I WANT TO READ MOOOOOORE!!!!!" ^_^;; DO UPDATE ASAP!!! *drops dead if doesn't read any more of this story*
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude- Where are you at? You haven't updated since February! This is a really hot story and I for one would like to see more! I mean, I know that we all have lives outside of AFF, but come on , 8 months of no updating?? That is just not right. You have to finish this fic or I will find some way to flog you. (lol, just kidding!) But really, please do not abandon this lovely story.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the whole but ugly thing.... not good
i really have mixed feelings about this story....
i really have mixed feelings about this story....
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good When will you up date
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting very interesting more pwease....
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More story please!! This is an absolutely awsome story and I want to read MORE!!!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, but I thought that using "cunt" was a little offensive to females. I'm not trying to put you down or censor you, everyone is entitled to write however they like. But as I said before you're story is great, keep writing.