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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. The character development is awesome, especially giving the predator names. Please keep going I see this getting better and better.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice one...love the fic...too bad that the predators had to fight against each other because of lex...either way keep up the good work..update it soon coz i can't wait to read more of it...
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am hooked! I can't wait to see what happens.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey don't stop, please don't stop writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE, I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
Ooh man they SHOULD make a film like this! This is better!
Keep up the writing!
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Ooh man they SHOULD make a film like this! This is better!
Keep up the writing!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good! Continue!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Scar doesn't get killed!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noo, whats gonna happen to Scar... this was another awesome chapter to your story
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::jumps up and down in excitement:: TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!! .... ummm... calm now... This fic is one of my fave AVP stories I've read, your'e doing an awesome job of writing it
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and I hope that you will update the next chapter soon, the suspence is killing me.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please update soon... this is a wonderful, addictive story (which I've reread over and over cause its just so awesome) and I check everyday to see if you've updated... umm.. yeah thats it.. ::on knees:: please update...