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for Trapped in a Pyramid

by Jeremy86

person Sean
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more, please update as soon as possible
Is Lex going to get pregnant
person Weird Angel
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I couldn't wait 'til you post the next chapter. In fact I'm still anticipating the next. Keep 'em coming!
person LeX-ScAr_FaN
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! MoRe BaBy YeAh!
person Fluffy-san
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story I'm really looking forward to your update and those lemons...oh I hope they are hot and steamy.
I really enjoyed the movie it fueled my interest in the Yautja again and especially when the directors commentary in the movie mentioned that Scar was watching Lex's butt he was quite fascinated with her backside and her as a whole. There was definitely some chemistry going on between the two through out the movie. I wanted more from them but poor Scar had to die. This story is perfect not a lot of senseless lemons like some others I have read, but I have some questions:
1 Was the chestburster removed?
2 What was in that syringe they used on Lex?
3 What will the elders do to Scar?
4 How will the other predators react to Lex being a mate to a predator and with all the planned lemons will Lex become pregnant?
Finally add some pineapples (fetishes) to the story and no story would be complete without some oral goodies I would like to see how Scar would pleasure Lex that way since he has mandibles.

Great story please update soon.
person Leroy Jenkins
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot story please update soon I'm a big predator fan and I always wanted to see interaction between a female human and a male predator
AVP Prey did but not like this anyway I prefer Lex anyday over that puny,chain smoking Machiko.Well update when you can.

Great story
person Vito
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot stuff 'cha got here so please update soon Jersay.
person Zoelai
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeet! love it
person harryhollow
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is their going to be a baby *giggles* I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!
person junk food addict
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!!!
person Sean
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more, please update as soon as possible