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Great AVP fanfiction this is the second piece that caught my attention,I look forward to you next update.




More Lemons Please.

Please continue.

More, more, more , more!

I like the story so far, but the evil critic inside me aweakens at the 'evil black devils'.
So, I'll shut up roght now, bofore I offend someone.

Holy cow, a predator and a human female a black one at that I have to watch this movie does it really happen in this movie?

update.

Oh MY God, I can't believe that these two actually ..you know.From reading the novel and seeing the movie you could sense that some type of tension was between them, but I did not think that Lex would let a creature she knew very little about , a fierce savage hunter from another galaxy she feared boing her, but then again she was watching,and touching him every chance she got. Scar on the other hand seemed to be a little uneasy around her,which in my opinion showed his immaturity.
So, what's next what are they going to do when they wake,with an angry pissed of queen in the midst, the two having just you know,I can't wait to see this Lex's reaction and poor ol' Scar whom seems to be confused. You have to make this long enough to see the outcome.

Update soon I'm hooked. more lemons please. One post said it best "Make her feel good"

Scar, you go boy I can't believe that Lex would actually let Scar get that close to her, especially that way she seemed to hate the Yautja with a passion. so what's Scar's to do, he's done the taboo he's mated with an ooman will he survives the night with that xenomorph out there, what will the other Yautja do to him?
Please update soon, I hope these two make it thru the night keep the citrus coming.
Will Lex be pregnant with a hybird kid? What will she think in the morning, what will Scar think?

Ah...Ah... come on please update this soon. Don't punish us, okay I can't wait any longer.

Oh, man you mean to tell me that Scar hit that, whoa interspecies love so man what's a playa to do? Kill the men and love the women a bad a@@ one at that.
But serious man, don't kill off the pred he's cool I never heard of a pred doin' da do with a human you barely hear of them mating with their own kind in the comics,or the graphic novels.

Jersay, keep it coming I want to see what these two will do once they wake from their sex induced slumber,I would like to see the look on Lex's face now that she has bumped uglies with Scar, whom she claimed to despied so much, and Scar's reaction to all of this, will he love her and leave her or will he become overly protective of her and protect even if it means death or being casted out of his clan. Wow, this could go so many ways just continue this and add some more "lovin" to this, some good "lovin', have Scar make her feel good like Billy Bob Thornton just knocking stuff over.pulling his dreads and so on.


YUP....YUP.

Whoa, What's next for Lex and Scar? So what's going to happen in the cave between the two, you must continue this story maybe here I can get some insight on this pairing.