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for Trapped in a Pyramid

by Jeremy86

person Maury
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay you have a serious cliffhanger here, so you must get us off. Since this is NC-17 there has to be some citrus here. I would love to see the reaction between these two especially Lex's reaction if Scar tries to put some moves on her in the cave,or vice versa, what means will these two take to stay warm, and finally did the queen survive the blast?

Please update soon.




GO FALCONS!!!!
person Semi
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story you must continue with this,I want to see where this goes. Please don;t kill off Scar.
person JLJ
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, love this so far. Hope to see more soon.
person Unknown
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Interesting so far