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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
are you updating or is that the end of the story??
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i absolutely love this. i'm with you on the 1920s. -sighs- don'tcha just love the glitz and the glamor and the mafia adn everything else about that time. man, i can't WAIT for some more. what a place to leave it! -despairs-
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heya
this is the first time I review a fanfiction, so I hope you see how urgent this is. I just can't believe that you didn't updat this story until today. Over one year has passed. Just think of that. Your story is not like stories I used to read and still do. Just... you describe those sexual attraction between Will and Jack and it's not like a porn at all and after reading those badly written fanfics for my whole life I'm very grateful... well... at least I was... until I saw the date of your last update...
It's seven chapters now, right? (At least I guess so) and... it's not boring... AND they're not having sex until now... it... is damn amazing. how dare not to update *dies*
Greetings, Vince
P.s Reading my review once again I guess I made my point of view very clear... I really want to read more chapters, but I just can't describe what I love about your story conciderung my lack of using the english language (sounds weird to me. However I hope you know what I'm talking about)
this is the first time I review a fanfiction, so I hope you see how urgent this is. I just can't believe that you didn't updat this story until today. Over one year has passed. Just think of that. Your story is not like stories I used to read and still do. Just... you describe those sexual attraction between Will and Jack and it's not like a porn at all and after reading those badly written fanfics for my whole life I'm very grateful... well... at least I was... until I saw the date of your last update...
It's seven chapters now, right? (At least I guess so) and... it's not boring... AND they're not having sex until now... it... is damn amazing. how dare not to update *dies*
Greetings, Vince
P.s Reading my review once again I guess I made my point of view very clear... I really want to read more chapters, but I just can't describe what I love about your story conciderung my lack of using the english language (sounds weird to me. However I hope you know what I'm talking about)
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh! please update! this is a great story! i can't wait for jack to find will's name and for them to...yeah, great fic so far, i love them in the 20s--so great!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this lovely little fic? I've been waiting patiently for months, luv. PLEASE, PLEASE finish it or I just may die!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better finish this. Or else! *shakes fist*
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVE the 20s! It's probably my favorite time period ever. I read it once and couldn't stop thinking about it, so I came back and read it again. you must update, I'll...uh..give you a cookie, yeah, that's it! PLZ don't leave us hanging. This is one of the best Jack/Will things I've ever read!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so cool!! I love the roaring 20's, the great art deco era!!
Oooooo and you can just feel the sexual tension.
And the secrets and the lies *sequels*
Plez, plez, plez update!!!
Oooooo and you can just feel the sexual tension.
And the secrets and the lies *sequels*
Plez, plez, plez update!!!
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job... but there's the problem of having no Jack/Will smut!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally, completely, utterly, impossibly best most sexually charged Will/Jack AU story I've ever read. Its so good I can't even give you enough praise for it. And imagining Jack and Will in suits and bowler hats? And the way you made Will badass! Its so mother fucking amazing that I just am honestly slavering over the story over here and desperately waiting for you to write the next chapter.