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7 chapters with in a couple days and then nothing for 2 weeks..... I NEED MORE!!!!!! Where's the rest of it, or atleast the next few chapters? PLEASE update soon!! I'm not sure how long I can last without more!!!!!

Please, write more. One of the few new interesting stories that are slowly popping up around.

-nerual.

Pretty good story, but don't write about poker if you don't know how to play poker.

really interesting take on an AU...fits perfectly! i love that your Will is somewhat wordly BEFORE meeting Jack. Plus Jack in a zoot suit? you´re killing me here...how HOT!!!

I don't even know if I should even call this a review! It would be more aptly titled "praise!" Well, in this case anyways. I just got into reading fan fiction since one of my best friends recently started writing them for a TV show. I'm a fan of the Will/Jack scenario, and to my delight, there are TONS of fan fics about them on the net. I've never reviewed anyone's before, but I couldn't help but tell you how good I found yours! I LOVED it! You are true to the decade, which is also a favourite of mine, and true to the essence of Jack and Will's characters while giving them a spin and a plot all your own! It's great stuff! Really! Not that I pretend to be in a position to critique, but honestly! PLEASE keep it up because I'm dying for more! And thanks for making my homework-filled evening SO much better!

Wonderful story. Please update soon!

I'm so glad you updated! With the fact all the livejournal's right now are down for no telling how long there going to be down and everything tonight just seems so slow. This diffently lifted my spirts some.

Anyway getting back to why I'm actually writing this review. I wanted to tell you that I liked the chapter and found the poker game to be interesting and could only get more interesting. I wonder what going to happen.

Anyway please update soon, I can't wait to read more.

great chapter. I love how both Jack and Will are in the whole I might actually feel something for the other person phase. (does that make sense?) Anyway can't wait for the next chapter. I think I've said this before and if I haven't this story is very interesting and very nicely thought out.

lol! don't forget the bob cut and foot-long cigarette!

you're amazing. i turned on my computer this morning, checked adultfanfiction.net, and there were two new chapters up. a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but that's just me being nitpicky. all in all, your story is absolutely brilliant. please keep the chapters churning out. if you decide to stop writing in the middle of the story, i shall have to hunt you down and make you watch teletubbies. on repeat.

this fic is soooo good! please update soon!