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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic!
AUs with PotC are among my favorite fics (esp. if its Jack/Will ;)
I can't wait to see what happens when Jack figures out who Will is, its bound to happen, Jack knows all... eventually.
how jealous can Louie and Will make Jack? hopefully we'll find out in the next bit!
I really enjoy the '20s setting. Given their characters in the movie, its really easy to see them enjoying that era. And we all know Jack wouldn't take Prohibition lying down! Will as a gambler is a little harder to believe, but I prefer it to him being a law-abiding citizen. Everyone's gotta make a living somehow.
How you will bring in all the characters (are you planning on using all the movie characters?) will be interesting, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about Bootstrap.
I really can't wait for the next update, so make it soon please!
AUs with PotC are among my favorite fics (esp. if its Jack/Will ;)
I can't wait to see what happens when Jack figures out who Will is, its bound to happen, Jack knows all... eventually.
how jealous can Louie and Will make Jack? hopefully we'll find out in the next bit!
I really enjoy the '20s setting. Given their characters in the movie, its really easy to see them enjoying that era. And we all know Jack wouldn't take Prohibition lying down! Will as a gambler is a little harder to believe, but I prefer it to him being a law-abiding citizen. Everyone's gotta make a living somehow.
How you will bring in all the characters (are you planning on using all the movie characters?) will be interesting, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about Bootstrap.
I really can't wait for the next update, so make it soon please!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty fun story so far! I love the lingo and oh so typical Chicago "roaring 20's" styles!! Before this, I hadn't ever thought of Jack and Will in the 20's, but it looking at it, that time does seem to fit them extreamly well! Can't wait for more!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is hot stuff! I can so see Jack and Will in suits and bowler hats, cheating innocent people of their money. Looking forward to more!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one adorable story! I don't usually like AU's, but between this and Leave Me Lying Here, I might just reconsider. You really do know how to write. Will is a liittle OOC, but I like the direction you've taken him! Far better than the usual "Binky" he ends up as in other stories (and the movie as well, with that polish hostage scene...).
Love it so far! Please continue!
Love it so far! Please continue!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you used "copacetic!" *dances in glee*
the dialogue is absolutely perfect! you captured the 20s lingo beautifully. i can just imagine will and jack talking with the 20s accent with bowler hats tipped sideways. please write more!
the dialogue is absolutely perfect! you captured the 20s lingo beautifully. i can just imagine will and jack talking with the 20s accent with bowler hats tipped sideways. please write more!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah. Hotness. Will bringing off another guy with Jack watching. Excuse me while I go melt into a puddle.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. Please update soon, or we'll have to get out the cannons. :)
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story isn't bad at all. I look foward to reading more soon. I have one question though what time frame is this story in I want to say sometime in the 1980's or maybe sooner but I'm really not sure.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good fic. Interesting plot, and it's developing rather nicely. Please update soon; I'm looking forward to reading more.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic! will as a gambler and jack as a bootlegger - sweet! i can't wait til jack finds out about will's secret talent. and am i right in assuming that this takes place during the 1920s, aka the roaring twenties? my us history's a bit rusty, but i think that was around the time an amendment banning the sale of alcohol was instated, and speakeasies were born. anyways, please update soon!