rate_review Reviews

I love your story it was great. Lex/Tim all the way.

it's great!

Lex sounding like a 'five dollar hooker'...lol...I love that line...a hot sibling incest romp

This was one of the first stories I read when I discovered this site, and it was what convinced me what a great place this is! This story absolutely rocks, Tim/Lex is such a great pairing. Would love to read more of their adventures together.

hey malcolm, its all good. yeah, i know i got a little mixed up, but i think it worked better this way. good observations though dude. i wrote these three stories in the space of a day after reading the book for about the thirtieth time. currently considering something from Lost World, maybe Ian/Sarah and his daughter somewhere in there i dunno.

I'm not going to comment about the story, that shouldn't suggest that I don't like I'm just adressing a small fact I found interesting. You made Lex the older sibling and Tim the younger. Now those of you wondering but that's how it was why would it strange? It was, in the movie. But this story was was fasioned after the books. I know you have the Jurassic Park books you even stated you did your 'Jungle Terror' summary. The counter candy bars all only in the book. these one could say are argueable, that most people would expect these things in a cafeteria, but the two biggest pieces in your story that prove the it's bases on the book are: one the fact that Grant went to fix the genorators, something only done in the book, in the moive he went to go find help, and a doctor for Tim, and the second and most incriminating was your reference to ginger ice cream. Maria's specialty as Hammond called it. A specific fact stated exsclusivly by the book. These facts prove my point, but in the end who really cares? Creative lisence, man. Do whatever the fuck you want it's your story. Just another rambling philisophical morphine addict like Malcom. C ya later

that was amazing. i had to jack off right after reading it
best stroy i ever read

That was fair. The pregnancy may have actually happened, but was dumb in the case of this fantacy and spoiled the mood. Besides...To sue the Carters would prove difficult since DNA would be checked. And don't believe it would not be thought of because this WHOLE situation EXIST because of bug DNA.

Also, ANY of the men still on the island could have had Lex at any point before the paleontologists of the 'Koatician' arrived. VERY bad plot logic, dude.