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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAUGH! i can't believe u ended it there. darn you. :p
please don't stop! you've gone and bloody hooked me on this story... already suffering dratted withdrawal or something... :)
please don't stop! you've gone and bloody hooked me on this story... already suffering dratted withdrawal or something... :)
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Naughty! That was just mean! get our hopes up and then crash them, but it was really well written. I didn't expect it at all. The story is really doing great.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... please keep writing!
i saw Van Helsing (finally) only a week ago or so and immediately fell in love with it.. i'm more surprised than anybody else that i went looking for fanfiction. but that's beside the point. this is really well written, and you've absolutely captured their characters-- don't stop, i love it!
i saw Van Helsing (finally) only a week ago or so and immediately fell in love with it.. i'm more surprised than anybody else that i went looking for fanfiction. but that's beside the point. this is really well written, and you've absolutely captured their characters-- don't stop, i love it!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH You stopped before the sex!
How could you? Please update soon
How could you? Please update soon
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! Carl's so cute! VanHelsing you JERK!!!!!!!!!! Leaving Carl while he's in a fragile state...Oh, um just ignore the ramblings of and insane woman...soo...update soon and don't do drugs!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, you really have quite a way with words. I love the plot, I've become enchanted. The bulid up of the storyline and realistic characterizations are spectacular. I'm hoping that you continue to update, you have such a thrilling skill. Carl's innocence is so sweet, and very touching. Van Helsing's . . . lustful nature is highly entertaining as well. Oooh Egypt, I do so love the land. I really can't wait to see what plot twists lie ahead for the boys, your story is very exciting and captivating. Plus the quick with and dialogue is stunning; another nice thing is that you don't go over-board with detail but you also don't just skip over things, you've achieved quite a balance it's very admirable. *grins* *glomps* *waves*
Icy
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore your story! It is so wonderfully written that I nearly died! I pray you continue with this writting! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! May the muses be with you ^^
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I am really into it.
thanks for sharing.
will there be more?
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thanks for sharing.
will there be more?
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! oh my god. you so have to write more. i am so addicted not only to your story but to your writing style as well. if you dont write more soon i fear i'll go insane with withdrawl symptoms.! GABRIEL/CARL FOR EVER!!! W00T! Rock On! \m/~_~\m/
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i love your story the way you have developed your characters is extremely believable. i really really hope you continue your story because i cant wait to read more. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!