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by DonnaLynn

person OMA
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like. i always wanted them together. keep itup.
person Aleerah
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! Tht so totaly sucks tht Russ walked u p@ tht moment. I love the story so far. Keep up the awsome work. Please update soon.

Aleerah
person Jess
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing i really enjoy this fic.... Keep going :)
person vinchicangel15
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the jim and chris attraction, keep up the fantastic work.
person burned
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey :) Are you going to continue this story? 'Couse I realy would like to read more. It's great!!!
person mizukimarr910
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damnitt you really have got to update again soon. please it really kills a buzz when you get to the end and there's nothing else there this story is great i've read a good deal of SWAT fics and everyone tries to make Chris a lot tougher than she really is but you did a really good job with her. please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910
person Raquedan
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop there! C'mon! I like it, that should be fairly obvious, but I'll tell you anyway. Please continue.