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for Sea Change

by Nemain

person Anon
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, a long wait, but a good chapter :) So it was worth it.... can't wait for more
person MarzBar
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the first story and am entranced with this one as well. However, I must say I'm surprised that Anna Maria could think the little girl could have done the crime. Does she think it's witchcraft? Looking forward to more.
person Akuma
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“What’s the matter, love?” he asked in a low voice, stepping closer, his hands carefully folded behind his back. “Are you afraid I’m going to ravish you next to the stores?”
--how can Myrtle refuse a man like that??! Lol.

Awsome chapter. Update again soon!
person Trissa
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Awesome sequel so far! Update soon. I think we need some Myrtle/Jack action, ne? ^O^
person Akuma
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I read your first story and have been eagerly awaiting the sequel! I'm glad to see it's finally up! ;)
person Akuma
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"It's your damned witch"

Aw, doesn't that sound endearing? Lol. Gotta love Gibbs, even if he doesn't seem too fond of Myrtle (who is one of the most awesome OC's out there).

I do, however, have one complaint. Could you make the chapters longer? Lol. I just can't get enough of this story and your writing is brill. Please? ;P

Get the next chapter up soon! I can't wait to see Jack and Myrtle's reunion will go. *wink wink* Lol.