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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poorly, written.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so fucked up..............but I found it incredibly fucking funny too.
Not many shrek fanfics....why not type some more?
Not many shrek fanfics....why not type some more?
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well ... uh ... it would of been better if you added a plot, or something to make it sound convincing that they'd suddenly do that. Couple of spelling mistakes, could I suggest a BETAer? Try, try, try again! Good Luck.
~ Mercika
~ Mercika
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK! THIS SHIT IS SICK!! VERY BADLY WRITTEN TOO
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bleeeh! Badly, BADLY written, sheer porn and to add more - BAD PORN! You call yourself a writter?
I join the previous review - I hate this "thing" that you call fic.
I join the previous review - I hate this "thing" that you call fic.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
different...
LATA
but I did like it.
KaTa
LATA
but I did like it.
KaTa
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you.
Not for the premise of the story, which is disturbing enough as it is.
But the fact that you would post your POORLY WRITTEN (like REALLY) story here is enough to maake you worthless aas a human being.
Did I mention that I hate you?
Not for the premise of the story, which is disturbing enough as it is.
But the fact that you would post your POORLY WRITTEN (like REALLY) story here is enough to maake you worthless aas a human being.
Did I mention that I hate you?