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for Deceit and Decisions

by JennyPugh

person rowenablue
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers, the bane of my existance! Still, another great chapter. Can't wait 'til the next one!
person Josette
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading a couple of weeks ago, and I read them while I'm at work, (i work graveyard 10p-8a) I haven't been able to post reviews. Something to do with firewalls and filters. I have finally read ch 16 of d&d and just wanted to let you know that I think you are a great writer and I hope you continue writing after you have finished D&D. I will be anxiously waiting for updates. Keep up the great work.
person MarzBar
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice new house for Jack and Jenny. Will you and your muse let them keep this one? They deserve to have a little security for Jenny and kids for a change. I still worry about Condent and his motivations. More please.
person Chelsey
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are indeed a wonderful writer. Update soon my friend! I can't wait.

-Chels-
person Ducky007
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter...will they actually stay and live in these houses or are they gonna move again??? And when is Jenny having her baby?
person rowenablue
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Tortola works out for them. As a former army brat, I know that having to move just when you were beginning to settle in is a real pain. Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
person MarzBar
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see we're moving along toward a new home for Jenny and Patience. I hope that Condent doesn't turn out to be the spy.
person Chelsey
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's like I read your mind with the twins thing. Creepy.......we should really co write a story. What do you think Ani??
Update soon, can't wait for the birth!

-Chelsey-
person rowenablue
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I was quite pleased when I saw that you had updated and am already antsy for the next chapter. Will Jenny have the baby soon?
person ducky007
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome!!! is jenny really gonna have twins?