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for Once Upon A Time

by SilkenPetal

person elh
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good sex scenes but a bit confusing with these random parts thrown in or maybe i was just tired i kept skipping. the first couple of chapters quoting the movie verbatim just seemed redundant, i mean i know he movie lines by heart lol (sad but true)and dont really need to read them word for word i found myself yayaya skip ski til ur own original parts
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I'm thoroughly hooked! It can be very tricky when you start writing without a set goal, but I hope inspiration comes to you soon.
person Snootchie
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. Im really into it. I dont read fanfiction often, but this really entices me.. I could just make up the ending in my head but this is so amazing I have to request more. Lovelovelove it. Youre a great writer :)
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please come out with the next chapter. this is a good story. and i can't wait for more
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. i'm amazed at how well you've taken the end of the labryinth and made a new story from it. i can't wait to read more.
person TONIA D
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY I LOVED THE STORY SO FAR AND I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE REGULARLY OR SOMETHING SO I DONT GET BORED OUT OF MY MIND LISTENING TO SOME OTHER NOT SO WELL WRITTEN STORY OF J/S PAIRING. JA NE
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oo, this is pretty good. You should update soon or I may just cry!
person Athlantis
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why the hell haven't you updated this?????!!!!

get your butt back here!!!!!

anyway, I'm absolutely loving this!!!!

please, oh pretty pretty please with a cherry on top, finish this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Megan
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this site from a friend and I found your story.
I must say that I love it! The Labyrinth is one of my favorites but to take it this deep makes me love it even more. Going more in depth with the characters and adding parts of the movie into it really makes it seem like this is what happens before or after the movie.
Well done!
person Annie
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor linda. i love this, update soon.