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Ah yes. Very young indeed. I hope that he will have the patience to let her grow intellectually and emotionally. She belongs in the underground anyway. The Above is too drained of true Magic to sustain her.

Good. I'm glad he found her so soon. It would have been awkward the longer she kept it secret. Interesting dream. Interesting how long he's been around and just how powerful he is... and alone.

Past lives maybe? I hope they stay together in this one.

Oh, and way to go Hoggle. Mr. Sensitivity award. 9_9

Hmm. So he knows who she was. Sarah wouldn't be happy with his manipulation of her mother and thus her life. Who would?

very sexy first chapter!

Great story I can't wait to read more!!!!

Oooo this is rather good. Props to yuo. Im looking forward to an update

WOW. That was amazing. This is the first Labyrinth fic that I have read. I loved the movie and I watch it at least twice a week. I am amazed by your story telling ability. I hope that you update this story soon!

oh no! almost too much time has elspsed... that was many extremely detailed and beautifully written scenes, like an artist paints with a brush, you paint with words, landscapes, portraits, emotions... so vivid, so real, that i was no longer in my office, staring at black and white on a screen... i was surrounded by the sights, sounds and people of the worlds you created. BRAVO!\

but then... as i clung, hanging on your words, i abruptly fell as you withheld them... i staggered as i stand, my mind bruised and bloodied, i plead, i shout, "please, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! please, please..."