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for Once Upon A Time

by SilkenPetal

schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. You did a great job with your opener and how it keeped to the movie. Can't wait to read more. ~Anya
person SeductionsClaim
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Eagerly awaiting more with bated breath
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this story as soon as you possibly can.
It's wonderful!
I love it!
person Kim
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY....PLEASE KEEP WRITTING!!!
person EvilKittenn (not signed in)
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright... I am very pleased so far. I am liking the first person action, though this the first one I have read that actually has a plot. I am enjoying your writing style. It brings a fresh new look to the old kind of stories. Your details bring a wonderful picture to mind and of course I liked the sex scene... *grins* Continue please, for I look forawrd to reading where this is going and what exactly is going to happen.
person Kat
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story line. Best of luck with the next chapter. Can't wait to have the dreams explained.

Kat
person Blackrosephantom
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, why have you not completed this wonderful story? I'm tempted to steal it from you to make it my own. Just teasing.
person G.A.P.F.
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic! i can't wait to read the next chapter. please hurry up and update again soon! =^_^=
person jareth\'s white boxers
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. let me guess why sarah keeps dreaming about magical women of jareth's past...she was them in previous times, loving jareth many times. nice tale. please finish.
person missmaryrae
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!