rate_review Reviews

excellent work!

This is the first Patriot fanfiction I've ever read. I always loved Tavington. This is a good story, and I hope you still have it in you to update!

Wonderful story! Very intriguing. I loved the girl and how strong and free she was and set against such an irrepresible man hehe! The ending was a bit of a twist but a wonderful surprise. Excellent writing! and Jason Isaacs is HOT lol (Just thought I'd add that!) ^_~ )O(

The ending was better than I expected. The metamorphosis of Tav could be a little more fleshed out, but it was pleasurable to see him becoming a better man for the most part. And I absolutely love Rebecca's anger in the end with not a sexual thought on her part to be found. Very believable. I hope that if you continue your story, make Tav beg for Rebecca's mercy. Rebecca should make Tav kiss the ground she walks on; don't let her give in too soon, she deserves to know for sure he is serious about being a changed person for the good! Overall very enjoyable fic. P.S. The sex scene was hot! Mmm.. Colonel Tavington giving cunninglus...Grrr!

another good one Jo.

Thank you for finishing this. I'm happy you didn't leave it just hanging. I'm also happy you didn't kill him off. I'd love to see more.

Sheesh woman made us wait long enough heh

*bounces up and down happily* I like it!!! Nothing like a good woman bring about a bad boy :)

So ummm yeah any more of the naughty slytherin hanging around?? hehehehhe

Unlike most Tavington fics that I read, it's good to see you made a strong female characters who is about something and not just another weeping victim or sex crazed prostitute. Other than that, I'm starting to see Rebecca lose some of her feistiness. I hope you don't diminish her strength too soon as I can finally say I'm enjoying a Tavington fic that involves an engaging main female character! Bravo.

Hey, I just found this story. I love Tavington fics! Jason Isaacs made that character so damned sexy. This is a wonderful story so far. I'm hoping it's got a better ending than most of the Tavington fics I read.

oh my god that was FANTASTIC!! Heh and now that I've seen the movie its even better LOL.. i have an even better image of it all *purrs happily* there is more right?.... right??? *meeps and give puppy eyes*