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for Most Desirous Distraction

by scyllablue

person Inge
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! How sweet was that? Loved it. Loved it. That'd show them, huh? Go Alexander! :-)
person Marie
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I say again Wow! THAT WAS HOT! Best smut Ever! :)
person uh
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was written really well...and it was just sexy lol, you're a great writer, you captured how i think they would really speak well.
person ran
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! FINALLY I FIND A SWEET ALEXANDER FIC... THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY DAY!
person Illusion
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, I wish this never ends!
You wrote beatifully, especially with the speeches!
I loved it! definately one of my favourites ^^
person erfaciel
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is AMAZING. And dear Gods I feel like I need to take a cold shower.......

I also applaud the interplay between Alexander and Ptolemy. The Odysseus connection is not one people often pick up on. Very well done.
person kruemel
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa! i liked the achilles-patroculus-comparison, Phai's so sweet and sexy. good work.
person YuraYumi
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Your fanfiction was AMAZING!! When I first started reading and you pointed out how they belonged to history, I was thinking "Oh my goodness, I think I need to give this author a great big hug and thank you....."
First off, you have an beautiful writing style. Your stories flow wonderfully and provide great imagery. I really loved reading this story!
And, also, thank you for knowing so much about the historical aspect of Alexander the Great, knowing that he had a male lover, as well as all his other lovers, knowing that he thought of himself as Achilles and, something that made me want to really hug you, knowing about Patroclus, how he was Achilles lover and how Alexander thought of Hephaestion as Patroclus!!!! This story is everything I could have ever wanted rolled into one thing!! I am so happy I read your story and that is was my first Alexander/Hephaestion fiction! You put in so much history to really give it truth and you put in so much of a story line so that it wasn't like a History essay!!! Thank you so so much for this story, honestly! It was a wonderful reading expierience, thank you so so much for sharing this! Please, keep writing, it would be a shame to loose someone who has such a balance of an amazing writing style with incorporationg history into it as well!!! Thank you so much!! Have a great day!!

-Elizabeth
person calir
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely and hot! Nice Achilles/Patroclus parallel too. Haven't seen the movie but who needs to when we have fics like this?
person seraphina
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've only just recently started to read Alexander/Hephaistion and i must say that this is by far the best adn hotest i've read! wonderfully written and lovely to boot. Well done!