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for Falcon's Beginning

by Raife

person Cold truth
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i think your storys are amazing. some of them are very enticing and catch my attention all the way through, although a few about the middle seemed tendious all though they are still brilliantly written, i liked the shorter chapters the best because they are more to the point and can be read quickly as there are alot of chapters, but apart from a couple chapters i absoloutly loved it, well done! keep up the good work!
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person Meredith
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it! I just read through all your new chapters. I'm so glad you're still writing. Keep up the good work.
person FallenFromGrace
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events, I like that Falcon isn't going to sit back and wait for the calvary. But I would hope that Tristan was a little bit more clearheaded and logical when things go bad that he would know what is the wise thing to do, despite what his heart tells him.
person FallenFromGrace
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read all the chapters in one sitting, this story is soo romantic! I also like that you are not just concentrating on your main characters, but are also hitting on the other knights. Good luck writing the next chapter, I'll be waiting for it!
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEE! :) I'm so glad you updated! But update again, sooooonnnnn!
person Nefretiri
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Tristan and Falcon's interaction together. They have great chemistry. More please.
person missmargo
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the whole story and this is very good, i just watched this movie the other day on my way home from Las Vegas, and I think you do very well in the way you write yor characters, this is a grat story I can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please tell me you'll update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Sheiado
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I came back from vacation just in time! lol A NEW CHAPTER! OMG! ...OOOOO the smutty goodness!!!! This is totally a steamy hot chapter! *wipes the drool from her mouth* lmao
person Meredith
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! I hope you keep it coming.

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