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Damnation! lmao that word is so funny to use lol! Anyways, great chapter and nice job of having me drool all over my keyboard (what a sight, let me tell ya! lol). Very good that her and Tristan are getting out of the "just friends" phase and into the "lovers". Lancelot seemed pleased (good, he should be!). Well, if you're running out of ideas I can probably cook some up for ya? Are you up for suggestions? Just let me know! lol. Anyway, can't wait for another chapter (so COOOL!).

its pretty please continue

Damnation! AH! They got interrupted by that Roman! grrr... Another great chapter to satisfy my new obsession with this story! LOL! I totally love this! *squeals happily*. Did I mention Falcon/Lancelot as being like bro/sis is so cool! The scene with Dagonet and Galahad was funny. And Scary too~ (damn alcoholic! lmao). Well, I can't wait to see what more will follow. Please update! (but you probably already knew I was going to ask that... lmao)

I like it. Please continue.

AWWW! That was a cute chapter *squeals in delight*. I can definitely see Lancelot pounding on that door furiously, as well as Bors restraining him. To see the "shocked" look on their faces when Tristan shuts the door in their faces, however... Gods, actually seeing *that* would be priceless lol. I'm definitely feeling the chemistry between F/T. Its so sweet! Anyway, I definitely want to read more (as you no doubt already know *grins*!!!). Spoil me rotten and give me another update! lmao

I cant wait for more! Great story so far :)

My updates are coming, Sheiado! I'm just having a couple of problems with writers block! (I'm writing a chapter almost every day, running out of ideas!) Chapter four is coming though!

YES! OOO ANOTHER ONE! This is definitely a wonderful chapter. Falcon kicked some ass! It's nice seeing her relationship both with her commander and with her fellow knights. Lancelot as Falcon's broham is cool lol (hay fight!). I am definitely looking forward to reading Tristan's reaction, as well as the others, with her attack. I almost want to see Tristan beat the hell outta the man (or kill him! lol). I am looking forward to more and you are doing an excellent job with this (three chapters and I'm already hooked!). Well, please do update in the next couple of days. I WILL be checking for it!

Wonderful beginning! I am definitely enjoying this so far and you have introduced Falcon into the story perfectly. I like how you started from Falcon/Tristan's first meeting and then later to the present. I can definitely see how their feelings for each other are beginning to bloom.... OOO! I bet Tristan will kill the man if he finds out who decided to attack her. The second chapter is very well written and I like how there is a mix between lust, affection, confusion, and fear with them. Tristan seems to be realizing how he feels and is coming out of his shell to show it while poor Falcon is confused but realizes both his feelings as well as hers (and fears it). I can't wait to see how you transition further with their relationship and in with events... I take it you are making this pre-movie? or will the movie portion be added in later? Well, I will definitely be waiting. Update soon!