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for Not Part of the Date

by LindsMarie

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schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. I was hoping there would be some breast usage but no. I jacked off while reading this. I would of loved this fic if it had a little of this:

She began to rise up and down on him. He leaned forward and nibbled on her hardened nipple, while it was bouncing up and down.

But you did do a phenomenal job!