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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this has me hooked, please update it again, soonish?
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo....mind control, me likey. Amazing update. I hope to see more and find out what they do from here.
Will she be her natural self or will the command 'Capture Richard B. Riddick' still be her main priority.
Will she be her natural self or will the command 'Capture Richard B. Riddick' still be her main priority.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. I'm not a very good speller or anything but I can point out one or two things. Unless you need a really good speller I can't help. I foyu just need someone to look it over, I'd be happy too! ^_~ Please update soon. And e-mail me with your answer! ^__^
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far. At first I was worried that you were showing Riddick as a bit vulnerable to Elyah, him getting aroused so easily, but it turned out fine in "The Hunt". Great job can't wait for more.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is an amazing story! At first I could't figure out what was going on, but it's has got to be one of the best Riddick fics i've ever read. I would help with the beta issue, but I have enough issues just trying to finish my own stories. Hope you find one as good as yourself....bye...UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Sam
Sam
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! That is a hot story. I love it and I need to read more. What's gonna happen next?!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Great ideas in there. Im hoping that there will be more. It didnt go quite as in depth as I would have like it. I am picky and tend to like the history side of most things.
Keep writing. Your style is great.
Keep writing. Your style is great.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this more and more, you've really got me intrigued. Now I want to know how Elyah can project herself into his mind like that... Fascinating! And it was a good call on your part to give that information about her. I would have done the same thing. You gave away just enough to taunt us, without giving away too much. Good job!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exquisitely mysterious, my dear... I hope you'll give us more...