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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was great story. There's so little of (het) Abe's stories. And I adore your style ;D Pretty steamy.
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There aren't enough abe/ f stories out there. I LOVE yours. It has steamy sex scenes but with a plot and I like maggie. You portray the characters really well and I hope your not done with the story I would like an epilouge or something about their kids growing up. Good work!
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. I'm sure it seems there's not a lot of interest because of the length. Many people are discouraged from reading long stories, but yours is still good.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a giggling moment for me ;3
When I started reading this, I was leaned forwards towards my screen to skim through the text.
A few minutes later, Im leaning back from my screen
with the images in my head are in a storm and I'm giggling like a school girl,
laughing through my hands as they are slightly covering my face.
Its intriguing to read this x3
and I cant wait to finish this ;>
w/♥
.:D:.
When I started reading this, I was leaned forwards towards my screen to skim through the text.
A few minutes later, Im leaning back from my screen
with the images in my head are in a storm and I'm giggling like a school girl,
laughing through my hands as they are slightly covering my face.
Its intriguing to read this x3
and I cant wait to finish this ;>
w/♥
.:D:.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*twitches* me want mooooooore...^_^ I'm a writer of fanfiction,net. I am Goddess of Twilight. Or one of the sides of her...^_^ recently we wrote a story of Static Shock, and my biggest fan has hinted at wanting a sequel, as I am more than happy to provide. I'd love to read the stories you have there for HB fics if you can send me their links.
BTW... is Abe like part nymph or something? *teehee* ^_^
Write us more.. tis our lifeblood. Read some of my stories, under CalypsoMarieMaxwell. I have a wide spread of those unfinished, but hey, you may find something in them that you might like.
good good... more ^_^
BTW... is Abe like part nymph or something? *teehee* ^_^
Write us more.. tis our lifeblood. Read some of my stories, under CalypsoMarieMaxwell. I have a wide spread of those unfinished, but hey, you may find something in them that you might like.
good good... more ^_^
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I love the story, Shadow. Love it! Keep writing, ok? It is enjoyed and appreciated. ;)
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but there's one problem, Abe's married to Maggie, not me (that and the fact that he's a fictional character)
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written, but a tip, my dear:
The reader should find it easy to like the protagonist. To be able to stand them, at the very least.
Your Maggie is unfortunately very Mary Sue, and comes across as a spoiled rich bitch, with no discernable flaws. If she were a bit more humble, I would find the story more enjoyable.
In your defense, though, the sex scenes are very good. ;)
Luna
The reader should find it easy to like the protagonist. To be able to stand them, at the very least.
Your Maggie is unfortunately very Mary Sue, and comes across as a spoiled rich bitch, with no discernable flaws. If she were a bit more humble, I would find the story more enjoyable.
In your defense, though, the sex scenes are very good. ;)
Luna
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chews on her Abe plushie and giggles*
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read some of ur other stories. There mad cool! Maggie reminds me of my Reesa in my stories. Please add more soon!!!!