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for Who's the better killer?

by fortunepill

person Megan Consoer
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it hon, and you know it. Yeah just figured I should let you know I'm keen on rereading this particular fic of yours. Yummie.
person bima
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good.

Don't see any problems with your English, but what do I know English isn't my first language too.
person Scifijunky
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... Even though you say English is not your first language, I think you did quite a fine job! I'm in the same situation as you are, so I can sympathize. It can be very hard to be really descriptive when the language is not yours but you did it beautiful. Powerful imagery and an excellent study of the characters.
person amniarix
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well English may not be your first language but that is no impedement to you writing a damn fine Kyra/Riddick first time fic. There are some really expressive pieces in here which elevate it above just a PWP, it is also a masterful character study.