rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. I like how descriptive you are. I could actually picture the three of them together, doing those things. It even had me breathing hard. Also, I'm so glad to see that I'm not the only one who finds Toombs attractive. I think you stayed true to his character as well. I like the idea that he's rough, but also a little gentle, and I like how you let us know that he's still a bastard by his last line in the story. Overall, good work. I hope to see more fics from you. Especially Toombs fic. Gee, can you tell I like Toombs? :)

So there it went - read it on ff.net and wanted to read it again.

Thought I was hallucinating because the chapter suddenly was so differnent.

Could you post your whole story here too, with the hotter scenes?
No one is gonna threaten you here to throw you out.