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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person SilverStarSheep
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters in one day! Awesome! *does happy, 'that was awesome' dance*

So maybe Bagoas isn't as helpful as I originally thought a second ago. He's got ulterior motives, and those are never a good thing…

I can't believe you left us at such a suspenseful cliffhanger though. That was pure evil!

*bites paperclip nervously* (Don't ask... -_-U) Hephaistion can't... die. Right?
person supercaptain182
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger?! Please let the spell wear off. Angry Hephestian is the coolest. Early labor sounds bad. Hopefully, the babies will be okay. I'm glad to see that Bagoas didn't get his ass kicked for steping out of line. Keep up the good work.
person SilverStarSheep
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... poor Hephaistion. He's so confused. My mind's changed about Bagoas though, he's sneaky but he's trying to Help Hephaistion, so he can't be too horrible.
person SilverStarSheep
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil Bagoas, an extremely shady Olympias, gulible Alexander and a oblivious, innocent Hephaistion, the perfect elements of a great mpreg fic. Keep up the great work! This story kicks ass!

*Sorry to hear about your surgery. I hope you recover soon.
person mai
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh hey! don't worry, no one is going to blame you for that!! we can't even thank you enough for taking all the pain in writing and sharing this story with us, you are cool and awesome! Take as much time as you want and enjoy your life (remember, it's YOUR time we are talking about here!! -- haha like you don't know =p) everything else can wait!! ^_~

what? a SURGERY!!!!! o.O what? when? how??? not a serious one, I hope?? but 2 weeks on bed.. now, you make me worry! please fill me in a little more info, ok? thanx!!

UNIVERSAL??? cool!! but I bet you gotta be so tired when you are back... hmm is that mean I have to wait one more day for the update? well, that's fine as long as you give us more in lenght *evil grin*

OK. I hope you have a great time tomorrow then!

luv u too =D
person mai
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!! what did she do this time!?!? hope it's not that bad!!! sigh.. he will never get away from her as long as she is still nearby, no matter how much he is being careful, she will find a way to get to him sooner or later!! poor heph, ain't anyone going to help? where is Alexander? Clietus? Ptolemy? Cassander? anybody?????

SUCH a cruel cliff hanging you left us here, Ishkibibbles~~~~ guess I will have to wait until tomorrow and find out then? (how am I going to have a peaceful sleep tonight?? T^T) see u tomorrow!! *sniff*
person mai
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks god you are safe!!! Are you ok now? I know you didn't get hurt, I mean emotionally?? I hope you feel better!!!!!!!!

Ummmm to be honest, I'm getting more and more confuse with Olympias! What exactly does she want!?!? -*-
but I'm so glad Hephaistion is coming back to his senses finally! He was so out of it that I miss the real hephaistion so much!
I will even thank and love Bagoas if he is able to help Heph out and away from Olympias, regardless of his real intention~~
As always, nice update!! please give us more soon!!! *begging eyes*
person Janne
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job! looking forward for more, pls update soon!!!
person supercaptain182
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A collaboration between Bagoas and Hephestian...sounds awesome. Hephestian has alot of balls to go agaainst Olympias. I think he'll surprise her more before she can work her magic on him. As always great chapter.
person shuchan
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i changd my mind. i love bagoas. just get phai the hell away from crybaby and retarded-psycho-bitch, please!!!