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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person mai
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. this submissive hephaistion is so not like him, wonder why Alexander didn't realize that there was something amiss!? and now he is leaving him with Olympias???? only gods know what her evil plans are! and there is this Bagoas who await for the moment to strike! I feel so sorry for Hephaistion and his children (a twins??? omg, this must be tough!!) but overall... AwEsOmE!!!!!! I really can't have enough of your fic!!!!

ps. I personally think you are doing fine and beta is not that necessary and will surely slow down the process.. hey! this is supposed to be fun, right? don't take it too serious, it's not a god damned thesis!!
person Queendel
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like this update very much. Looking forward to more of the same.
Glad that you are o.k. and didn't get hurt in the accident.
person Jar
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rough fucking please.
person Jar
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hephaistion = sexy horny loving bitch. I love it!
person Raiknii
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant plot idea. I don't think I've ever seen a idea quite like this one.

But may I suggest a beta?
person Queendel
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update.

On the surface everything is so calm, loving, sweet and gentle.....but hearts are going to be broken soon...aren't they?


Looking forward to your next posting.
person shuchan
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BAGOAS MUST DIIIIIEEE!!! MUAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAA!!! *ciugh* alexander's still an ass (to Moi) and get rid of trhe spell on Phai: i wanna see his reaction when he finds out!!! *sado-smile*
person Jar
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cuuuute! More happy-family-time please!
person mai
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is so worth waiting!!! Alexander is real dumb here, how can he not notice something was wrong!?!? anyway...it would be great if they have this happy family time when Hephaistion is his normal self!!

btw, congratulation for over 100 comments!!!! ^O^
person Rivana
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That Goddamned son of a bitch!!! Grrr... I swear I'm so angry right now I'm positively vibrating. I just want to hit something, hard, smash it to pieces and just keep on going. *breathes deeply* This is a great story, really great. It makes me completely miserable, but it certainly moves me. Although you'd better make sure I get a happy ending with Hephaistion/Cleitus or something of the like or I won't be held responsible for my actions. *smiles sweetly*

*laughs* No, really this is a great story. Hope to see more of it soon, I can't wait to find out what happens.