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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person supercaptain182
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual awesome chapter, I hope Cleitus comes back and brings Hephestain back to his senses. Nice touch of drama from bagaos. Awesome! Can't wait for more.
person shuchan
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... interresting. but olympia's still a bitch, bagoas needs to be eliminatted, phai must be un-drugged (izzat even a word?!) and alexander needs to bess of a crybaby... other wise, OKAY!!! COOL FIC!!!
person CT
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LUUUV the new plot twist =D!!!! “Sssh Teodor, momma is here, yes, that’s a good boy” and “Ooo, Alexander, not now, not in-front of Teodor” - I sooo adore Heph in Mommy-mode *aaaw so cute* Can't wait til the next update...
person mai
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor hephaistion~~~ Olympias is EVIL as ever!!! Alexander can't be any help as always!! And now, we got Bagoas to make things even worse!!

sigh.. I'm not really sure whether it is best for Hephaistion to know the truth, everyone seems to be happy this way (except Bagoas, who will definitely reveal the truth to Heph once again)

person Jar
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please keep Hephaistion hot and willing. It's damn sexy! I want some pretty sex-descriptions!
person Jar
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! More! *squeals*
person shuchan
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OKAY!!! O is a BITCH!!! you made me hate her even more!!! and Alexander is acting like a cry baby!!!
person Queendel
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Olympias is so deceitful and untrustworthy. I hope her plan backfire, bigtime
Until tomorrow
person mai
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent updates!!!!! I'm just dying for more... sigh! I don't want to be greedy but I just can't have enough!!! it's a pity that all I can do to support you is sending my comment and encouragement, hope it can be a little help though~

yes, you almost made me hate Alexander BUT I also understand him! it's just that there are sooo many ways to express love and he seemed to choose the wrong way, which was influenced by him mother.. I just hope that he will do something smart and sincere once he find out to get Heph back

oh! one question though, can Hephaistion remember what happened while being under the spell??? ..well, just want to think along and understand him properly ^^

I'm glad you seems to enjoy writing this fic still, please update soon!!!
person Jar
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow Hephaistion seems a little more understanding now - good. I can't help but understand Alexander, although I wouldn't have agreed to this when I knewPhai would have those breasts forever.. omg.. write on, I love this story!