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for Someone needs an heir!!!

by Ishki

person shuchan
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i said it once, and i'll say it again: alexander is such an SOB!!! how could he treat Phai that way??! he's worth less than... and his mother is so... ARGH!!! juts make sure he's in a hell of a lot of pain soon (and a lot of it... and believe me, that guy does NOT deserve castration... even THAT is too good for him...
person Queendel
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How long is this situation with Heph going to go on??? I am so tired and sick of Alexander getting his own way...and continuing to demean Heph.
Until next update....
person mai
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my, i have to agree with all comments above, this Alexander really get on my nerves!! I almost hate him already for being so selfish (."/.) ...the only reason that I don't hate him yet is because he did it out of love and fear BUT didn't he know it was not gonna work this way!?!? agh~~~ can somebody knock some sense back to him!?!?

by the way, do you happen to know how is Clietus doing back in Macedon? hehe I just miss him because Heph did bring him up in the previous chap ^^

person mai
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling you are having more fun writing this (torturing our dear + poor heph) but I really do enjoy it and can't stop the silly smile that kept popping up on my face.. if not consider the fact that they are in the fight now, I'd buy for this lover's teasing --> although Heph wouldn't enjoy it that much ^^

can't wait to see what are you upto with the new plot you mentioned but pretty sure a lot more fun is coming!! thanks for the update, you make my weekend started nicely =D
person Jar
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy.. that was... wait, I shouldn't get turned on, should I?
person Queendel
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexander is beginning to get on my nerves and I am beginning to loathe him!!!
Until next update...
person Jar
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please make Hephaistion surrender to love..
person Queendel
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Alexander is being abusive now too?
Can't wait for Heph to be free of him.
Until next update,
person ......
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this looks awesome but where is our promised 2nd chapter.........
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where was the suppoaed second chapter you were going to put up and ur story is really good